Outline Item:
Body Section #1
- My first body section will discuss the logos, including statistics and facts, about how much less the women’s soccer team is getting paid to men.
Adaptation of Outline Item:
Exactly how much less is the Women’s National Soccer Team getting paid?
That is a good question, and here are the facts: The U.S. Women’s National
Soccer Team are getting paid 40% of what their male counterparts make. For
every game, the women earn $1,350 if they win and nothing if they tie or lose.
However, the men receive $9,375 for a win, $6,250 for a tie, and $5,000 for a
loss, and that is only for playing against teams not in FIFA’s top 25. The men
can actually earn up to $17,625 for winning games against teams ranked in the
top 10. “We are the best in the world, have three World Cup championships, four
Olympic championships, and the men’s national team get paid more to just show
up than we get paid to win major championships. (Solo, U.S. Women’s Soccer Team
Stars Allege Pay Discrimination).” Because of these huge pay discrepancies, the
women’s team decided to hire Jeffrey Kessler, one of the best sports lawyer in
the country, to help them fight this battle. Kessler supports the team whole heartedly and
even believes, “the women’s team has been more valuable to the U.S. Sports
Foundation than the men’s team has been (Kessler, U.S. Women’s Soccer Team
Stars Allege Pay Discrimination).” While some people may argue that the men’s national
soccer games are more popular and bring in more revenue than the women’s team,
the facts prove otherwise. Just this past year, the Women’s National Soccer
Team made $20 million more in revenue than the men’s team. It is also argued
that commercial ads will pay more to be aired during the men’s games on TV. That
may have been true last year, however, the “2015 Women’s World Cup was the
most-watched soccer event Americans have ever tuned in to (Block, U.S. Women’s Soccer Doesn’t Deserve Equal Pay
— They Deserve More).” From that fact alone, we can conclude that TV adds will
have to start paying more to be aired during the women’s soccer games, due to
the increase of viewers. With the statistics on their side, the women are
confident they can win this battle. Their goal is to not only receive equal pay
to their male counterparts, but also open up the eyes to women all around the
world and inspire them to fight for their rights, especially equal pay for
equal work.
1. How did you decide to use form to present your content in the raw material you’ve shared here? How did the conventions of your chosen genre influence your choices?
- I decided to share my raw material in the form of a written paragraph. Like I said in my last blog post, I chose a video essay for project 3. For the video essay, I am writing out a script for my raw material and then recording myself and adding video and images next week.
- The production of this raw material went pretty well. I used all of my sources I found last week, collected all of my data and statistics, and wrote it all in a cohesive paragraph for my body section number one.
Hey Emily!
ReplyDeleteI think that this rough rough cut of the video essay is really good. I think you give a really great idea of the evidence that supports why the women's soccer team deserves equal pay, but I'm wondering if you would be able to insert your own opinion into the matter more? No need to be shy on this, since it is an argumentative essay essentially.
The information is incredibly detailed, especially with the exact salaries per game, and views for the games.
The sources seem credibly, and I'm sure you will either be citing them at the end of the video or will sneakily incorporate them in. ;)
Anyway, great job!